A deep wound
like that bitten by a hound
As if your heart is being peeled
A scar thats never going to get healed
That is how you would feel
When someone you love so much
Leaves you denying your love
After being with you in love
But when he was after you
Saying i fell in love at first sight with you
as if he was romeo
and you the juliet
without you he could never live
But all that was his personality he showed
Personality shown does not show the character that is flawed
That is why you realise it late
After he used you as bait
Calling you a betrayal
When you are so lost
Wondering why he left
In utter grief....
Soon he would realise
Soon he could also visualise
When someone he really love
Leaves him, calling him a betrayal
How it really feels to be called
A betrayal....
3 comments:
nice 1. a touchin poem..
ur gud in dis 2.
bt let me ask.. r u hurt?
hey who wrote this a boy or a girl.
wat abt wat girls do to boys..........
o rites!! this one was kinda intense but still kewl...though the person may neva be called a betrayer....as he might really be happy with this new person that they are together for good n maybe he really was unhappy with the "juliet"...oohh n the juliet might meet this WONDERFUL guy n be much happier than she eva was with the betrayer! TA-DA! well thats wat i wish will happen to me! hehe ^_^
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